I'm liking your work on these two models, and i think it's because of the different shapes you've used. The diamond like ones in your first model are great and your second model looks equally as good with the maze and the separated levels. Overall, good 'form'.
One thing I should mention though (actually 2) is that the models look great, but for the two studios and the gallery space, they're sort of cramped and although the exterior looks great, the interior is kind of bland and rectangular. Sure it's still space, but i think if you work into something a bit more creative it'll pay dividends.
Also your stairs are looking sort of similar. Remember that the stair design is big component of the marking criteria, and I'm sure if you can mix some originality into them then they'll certainly look better and hopefully be more favourably looked upon by our tutor.
Otherwise you're looking on top of the work and you've got yourself some good Sketchup skills, so keep it up and best of luck with your final submission!
Hey Ryan, i think you should reverse the basement walls as they look extremely interesting. so turn them inside out, the complex shapes will be more interesting to view from the inside.
Second Model
Hey Ryan,
BalasHapusI'm liking your work on these two models, and i think it's because of the different shapes you've used. The diamond like ones in your first model are great and your second model looks equally as good with the maze and the separated levels. Overall, good 'form'.
One thing I should mention though (actually 2) is that the models look great, but for the two studios and the gallery space, they're sort of cramped and although the exterior looks great, the interior is kind of bland and rectangular. Sure it's still space, but i think if you work into something a bit more creative it'll pay dividends.
Also your stairs are looking sort of similar. Remember that the stair design is big component of the marking criteria, and I'm sure if you can mix some originality into them then they'll certainly look better and hopefully be more favourably looked upon by our tutor.
Otherwise you're looking on top of the work and you've got yourself some good Sketchup skills, so keep it up and best of luck with your final submission!
Regards,
Jaryd
Hey Ryan, i think you should reverse the basement walls as they look extremely interesting. so turn them inside out, the complex shapes will be more interesting to view from the inside.
BalasHapus